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19 August 2008 @ 12:17 am
[TW] Edward. BD SPOILERS.  

Fandom: Twilight
Characters: Edward. Implied Bella/Edward.
Title: Click. Ring. Change.
Rating: G
Word Count: 424 words
Summary: "I'm a little worried about Edward.... Can vampires go into shock?". Bit of Ed POV after he heard the news from Bella.
Notes: Thanks very much to make_me_irish (again) for taking a look at it. Thanks for taking your time with ti. ♥. I'm still tryig to decided which one I'm gonna use for the contest lol, but when I was trying to think what to write, rheashan suggested this, so... I gave it a try. This is mor elike my normal writing... but in English xD.


Softly, immediately, it tickles in the back of his mind. He shuts himself down. Power off, something screams. He can’t really think, there’s no room for reality, not fantasy, not possibilities. Better back off. Everything turns black. And oh, was he waiting for it. Eyes don’t see. Hands don’t feel. He isn’t breathing. He doesn’t need it either. It’s as if his brain imploded and could not go back to its proper place. It is the epitome of emptiness.


The noise pitches his ears. He can not place the sound, the place, not the reason. The world has gone upside down in a second. Faster that he could run a block, it became crazier than he could ever imagine.

Ring! Ring!

Who could be calling for his attention right now? When he is so lost, so confused? He wants the sound to stop, but can’t work out how to turn it off. Silence. Silence, peace and eternity. All he wants. It isn’t possible. It isn’t. He can’t bare the possibility. Block. Shut. Cut the world. Go the easy way.


Close. Brake. Make it stop. Figures crowd his eyes, the blankness surrounded by monsters, red irises that come to haunt him. This is not fate, this is no future. This is hell catching up with him. It is his punishment. It calls to him, it yells to him. It’s his fault entirely, and he has to pay. He can’t stand that Bella has to pay for him all along the way.

Silence and a sweet soft voice.

He can hear her. Through the emptiness of his body and heart, he can hear her. Talking, calmed. He wants to imagine a smile on her lips, somehow, and it just feels wrong. So wrong. He wants to snap, but he can’t.

“…I swear something moved inside me just now.”

It was those words, and he was out. His hand is in front of him, waiting. Begging. Light flashes back to him. He can’t talk, he can’t face her. He waits. One. Two. Three. He hears her mentioning his name. It felt surreal, just seconds before…


He can’t understand it. His hand finds its ways to his ear, and he can hear Carlisle’s voice on the other side. He searches for his own voice, words that won’t come out, words he can’t even imagine to say aloud. This was wrong, in so many ways he couldn’t even understand. And then the words are out… and this time, like never before, there’s no way back.
Current Mood: crushed
Current Music: something from the olympis lol
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[c]: [TW] <3 EmoEdwardnyaza on August 19th, 2008 05:17 am (UTC)
thank you very much ♥
Rebecca JJpurplerebecca on August 19th, 2008 06:26 am (UTC)
[c]: [TW] bit cheese-bit bloodnyaza on August 19th, 2008 02:02 pm (UTC)
Thanks ♥
niellemuch on August 19th, 2008 07:35 am (UTC)
very very good.
[c]nyaza on August 19th, 2008 02:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much ♥
Doddydoddyland on August 19th, 2008 08:48 am (UTC)
Excellent!!! Love it!
And, by the way, the layout of your journal is great.
[c]nyaza on August 19th, 2008 02:04 pm (UTC)
Re: Congrat's
Aw, thank you very much ♥
And thanks!
triaden: Twilight: Seducing a vampiretriaden on August 19th, 2008 02:36 pm (UTC)
great job, very insightful. i thin you captured his attitude very well. *grins*
[c]nyaza on August 19th, 2008 02:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much ♥
Gloria!: jamessowelu_26 on August 19th, 2008 07:13 pm (UTC)
Edward es el personaje por el cual me mantuve amarrada a Twilight, y aunque la historia del bebe para mi no sea creible? noo, otra palabra, porque aceptada es una cosa... lo aceptas que está y ya, pero esperada nunca. y no, no me soprendio en buena manera realmente, vamos, tampoco lo odio. LO que te quiero decir es que al final de cuentas la forma en como Edward ve el mundo me gusta y no. Es un personaje muy rico, que sinceramente espero se le haga bien justicia en midnight sun..! solo eso...
me gusta lo que lograste xD... aunque la forma en como dedujo ella que estaba embarazada no me gusta jaja leer a Ed en shock.. llamó mi antención.!!! =)
[c]nyaza on August 19th, 2008 07:21 pm (UTC)
yo encontré esa aprte amuzing bb <3
no sé si al final lo que dices e sbueno o malo... pero gracias linda LOL <3
Gloria!sowelu_26 on August 19th, 2008 07:34 pm (UTC)
dime que parte xD... auqneu de lo que escribiste no he dicho nada malo...!! quizas no lo exprese bien xD
[c]nyaza on August 19th, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
que no termine de entender que opinaste del drabble mujer =P <3
Gloria!sowelu_26 on August 19th, 2008 07:47 pm (UTC)
tu drabble me gsutó , tener esa vision de ed... en esa escena..! porque deesa parte del libro, me hice mil preguntas sobre él no sobre ella, y no porque ella lo contara sino porque el personaje de Ed me fascina.. hahaha.. dios, creo que te enrede otra vez!!

me gustó. Punto.
[c]nyaza on August 19th, 2008 07:57 pm (UTC)
Stephanie: Twilight Edward's virtuefrostbit_sky on August 20th, 2008 01:05 am (UTC)
I think it is good description of a man (human or vampire) in shock.

And her words that bring him back but he is still numb, very cool.
[c]nyaza on August 20th, 2008 01:53 am (UTC)
thanks ♥
i thought it was an interestng moment to explore. <3
rachelhecatedarkmagic on August 20th, 2008 10:06 am (UTC)
this is lovely. i personally like writing fics from edward's pov and i must say this has captured his character very well (:

[c]: [TW] <3 EmoEdwardnyaza on August 20th, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC)
thank you very much ♥ i love writing ed, but i'm always woried not to get him &heartrs;